问题补充：
根据以下提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你在地震中的一次逃生经历。
要点：
昨天夜里地震来袭时，你正在做家庭作业。
感到整个大楼在摇晃。有些书从书架上落下。
听到一个男人在大声喊叫。
叫醒父母,一起急忙下楼.
地震过后,楼还在那里,人都活着.
要求:1.短文应包括要点中所给信息,各要点均可作适当发挥.
2.行文连贯,书写规范。
3.词数80个左右。短文的开头已经给出,不计入词总数.
I was doing my homework when I was doing my homework when the earthquake started last night .I could feel the shaking of the whole building. Some books in my study fell to the floor from the bookcase. At the same time ,I heard a man shouting ，“Earthquake. Earthquake.” I quickly went into my parents’ bedroom and woke them up .And then we went downstairs in a hurry together. Luckily, the earthquake was not strong enough. After the earthquake was over, the building was still there, and everyone in the building was still alive.
答案：
(答案→)I was doing my homework when the earthquake started last night .I could feel the shaking of the whole building. Some books in my study fell to the floor from the bookcase. At the same time ,I heard a man shouting ，“Earthquake. Earthquake.” I quickly went into my parents’ bedroom and woke them up .And then we went downstairs in a hurry together. Luckily, the earthquake was not strong enough. After the earthquake was over, the building was still there, and everyone in the building was still alive.
解析：这篇短文要求我们根据提纲给出的内容描写一次在地震中的经历。在提纲中给出了我们非常详细的信息，包括地震发生时你在做什么，地震发生后做了什么以及心理感受等。因为这是描写一次地震中的经历，故整篇短文都要用一般过去时，所以每句话中动词的形式都要使用过去式的形式，尤其还要注意一些不规则动词的变化形式。如fall 落下的过去式是fell, wake 叫醒的过去式是woke等。写作时要注意描写这一经历的顺序，要严格按照时间的顺序来叙述，不能打乱。使用平时积累的一些有用的句型，以及用好一些连词，可以使短文表达连贯。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文，在这篇作文中作者向我们介绍了他在一次地震中的经历，短文描写内容完整，意思连贯。叙述时按照地震发生时、地震发生后的顺序，非常有秩序的写了这个过程，还有这其中的一些心理感受。文章中使用了正确的人称和时态，也注意到了一些不规则动词的过去式的变化，都非常的准确。文章中还用到了一些较好的词和短语，如at the same time, then, luckily, after 等。用这些词将地震发生后作者做的事情有条理的叙述了出来。短文中较好的句式有I was doing my homework when the earthquake started last night、I heard a man shouting、the earthquake was not strong enough.等。
根据以下提示 写一篇80词左右的英语短文 介绍你在地震中的一次逃生经历。要点：昨天夜里地震来袭时 你正在做家庭作业。感到整个大楼在摇晃。有些书从书架上落下。听到一个男人在大声喊叫。
