问题补充:
某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻译。
过去
生活贫困,房屋破旧。
污染严重,垃圾遍地。
现在
生活:住房宽敞明亮;许多人有自己的汽车;
环境变得更漂亮了。
旅游:每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。
将来
希望……(两点)
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small,
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old. Pollution was very serious. There was rubbish everywhere.
答案:
(答案→)In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old. Pollution was very serious. There was rubbish everywhere.
解析:这篇作文给出了写作的提纲,在写作时要构思好文章的结构,可按照时间顺序来写,注意要点的齐全。句子要完整,表达准确,注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。
【亮点分析】
这篇作文结构清晰完整,表达准确流利,要点齐全。文中有许多实用的表达方式Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown.现在,家乡发生了巨大的改变。Take place发生; more and more beautiful越来越漂亮; thousands of成千上万; all over the world世界各地;better and better越来越好;in the future 在将来;等等。
某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示 以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文 不必逐字逐句翻译。过去生活贫困