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新高考英语作文 概要写作 Being famous 评分标准及范文

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新高考英语作文 概要写作 Being famous 评分标准及范文

概要写作(满分25分)

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today’s star, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world’s attention. Paparazzi camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids (小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.According to psychologist Christina Villarreal, celebrities—famouspeople—worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. “Over time,” Villarreal says, “they feel separated and alone.”The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century B.C., painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their “story” alive forever.If fame is so troublesome, why aren’t all celebrities running away from it? The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted friends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place.Sometimes a few celebrities can get a little justice. Still, even stars who enjoy full justice often complain about how hard their lives are. They are tired of being famous already.

一、评分原则:

1. 本题总分为 25 分,按 5 个档次给分。

2. 评分时,先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。

3. 词数少于 40的和多于 80 的,从总分中减去 2 分。

4. 评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:

(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;

(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;

(3)上下文的连贯性;

(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。

5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

6. 如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。

二、各档次的给分范围和要求

档次

描述

第五档

(21~25 分)

理解准确,涵盖全部要点。

能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。

有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的语言。

第四档

(16~20 分)

理解准确,涵盖绝大部分要点。

所使用语法结构和词汇方面可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达。比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。

有个别整句抄自原文。

第三档

(11~15 分)

理解较为准确,涵盖大部分要点。

所使用语法结构和词汇方面可能有些许错误,但不影响意义表达。应用简单的语句间连接成分,使上下文内容连贯。

出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。

第二档

(6~10 分)

理解有些误差,仅涵盖半数要点。

有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,影响了意义的表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分。

出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。

第一档

(1~5 分)

没有理解原文,造成概要内容与原文主题不符。

有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。

多个句子抄自原文。

0 分

白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。

三、One possible version:

Living in the public gaze, stars suffer from great pressure. (要点 1)What’sworse, anxiety over their public appearance robs them of the objective self-image, which leads to the feeling of isolation in the long term. (要点 2)While being tracked has been a headache to celebrities for centuries, modern cameras and the Internet make it harder to be famous nowadays. ( 要 点 3. 4) However, by dealing with the stress wisely, stars still can stay popular and happy. (要点 5)

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